I like the way you set this up as an exchange between the sigh of desire and the frisson of ecstasy in a single line that also is closed with an end rhyme, ¨sigh, reply.¨ Excellent short lyric poem of surrender, Cheryl!
I so like the look of your personal blog here, my dear. Very professional in all ways, perfect as an introduction to your work off Gather.
You have a typo with ´echos´, you mean ´echoes´ in third person singular present tense.
So good to be following you a bit more closely. Goodness, Cheryl! I simply love this piece; perfection in brevity and intent.
Heartbeats echo on skin? YES, they do; don't they?
"passion's sweet persuasion..."
"love's sweet reply."
Wonderful imagery - just stunning work in such few words. I also love the way the writer seems to drift into contentment and utter happiness with the realization of:
Every line is a jewel in this one, Cheryl.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you set this up as an exchange between the sigh of desire and the frisson of ecstasy in a single line that also is closed with an end rhyme, ¨sigh, reply.¨ Excellent short lyric poem of surrender, Cheryl!
ReplyDeleteI so like the look of your personal blog here, my dear. Very professional in all ways, perfect as an introduction to your work off Gather.
You have a typo with ´echos´, you mean ´echoes´ in third person singular present tense.
Cheryl,
ReplyDeleteSo good to be following you a bit more closely. Goodness, Cheryl! I simply love this piece; perfection in brevity and intent.
Heartbeats echo on skin? YES, they do; don't they?
"passion's sweet persuasion..."
"love's sweet reply."
Wonderful imagery - just stunning work in such few words. I also love the way the writer seems to drift into contentment and utter happiness with the realization of:
"What more is there than this..."
Nice!