This blog contains poetry, short stories, and memoirs...
I rummage through clutter filled hallways,
cutting myself on sharp edges.
Voices echo...
I shiver in remembrance.
Tangled up in cobwebs,
I look for the spider.
Strong use of an image with literal and metaphorical significance, Cheryl. Your style has gotten much more focused lately. I especially like your use of punctuation here, also the way you displace masterfully into past fugue trance.
Thank you, John. I have been working hard on editing and cutting words in my writing.
Strong use of an image with literal and metaphorical significance, Cheryl. Your style has gotten much more focused lately. I especially like your use of punctuation here, also the way you displace masterfully into past fugue trance.
ReplyDeleteThank you, John. I have been working hard on editing and cutting words in my writing.
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